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was gonna pay €500 for this today.,.,i though fookem i will try myself for free.,.,.,.,
need my old blonde mateys to rate it out of 10???.,.,no fooking round guys.,.,.,lol.,.,.,
i feel pleased with my self this week with new lappie.,.,and my new web site.,.,what yall think..,.,.,.,

http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/

Ditch the all caps and use proper case, it will be far easier to read.

fair point thnq. i will look at this.,,..,,.,.,.,it was hard enough not doing these.,..,.,,..,..,.,.,.,.,things.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,

7/10 for visuality, not bad looking few more pics and you would be sorted. edit- a couple more pics on the front page maybe?
0/10 for name of company and text. Sorry it just sound like a total cowboy outfit and Fabfencing name doesn't help you either. Get some professional language on there and change the name of the company and it could look good. I would not buy from you based on this.

Sorry just being honest, hope that helps.

i have been fabfencing out here for nearly 2 years.,.,.,and it has worked ok upto now..,.,i got lots more pics to add but was getting fed up.,.,lol
all the work in the pics have been done by me.,.,or one of my guys.,.,.,

i think your right about the wording.,.,.,but i cut to the bone and tell them how it is.,.,i dont buid pergolas with a pen.,.,.,if you knw what i mean but thanks for pointing a few things .,,.,out.,.,cheers.,.,.,


starting to wish id never asked.,.,.,lmao.,.,i was so chuffed with my web stie.,.,.,now it's.,.,.,schite.,.,.,lollololol.,.,.,thnx guys i would rather the truth seriously..,.,

Being honest, I would get it done professionally.  A good website can vitually sell the product, you'd only need one extra sale all year to pay for what getting the website done will cost.

I'd also use a Cyprus email address, having a UK one can look a little dubious...

Get fabfencing.eu or .net and redirect it.
For a first attempt, not bad. 5/10

OK I can live with the name. Find a friend though who has good written skills though and it should make a difference, get rid of the cheesy smash it out the the park stuff though and make sure the language is professional. Other than that it does look ok though.

thnx it do look a bit cheesy now.,.,.,smash/park etc.,.,.,
im gonna be up all night now to re-impress yall later.,.,.,thnx

 ;spam;

Tidy it up grammatically James.

Always a space after a comma or full-stop, as here......(& throughout).

PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE

Should be......

Please, please, please

Remove the inverted commas, & use a full stop at the end of the sentence, as here.......(& several other sentences ditto)

"WE AT FABFENCING PROMISE TO BEAT ANY QUOTE" LIKE FOR LIKE,

Should be....

We at FabFencing promise to beat any quite, like for like.

Abandon the shouty all upper-case stuff, write like a normal person. Capitals at the start of a sentence, or for proper nouns.

The word "rot" needs changing. It just looks wrong, as here. And a full-stop at the end of the sentence.

WE ALSO OFFER A FULL 10 YEAR GUARANTEE AGAINST WIND AND ROT

We also offer a full 10 year guarantee against the material, & weather damage.

It's good. Go get 'em Fisher!

Oh yeah, remove all that "smash out of the park" nonsense.

thankyou sir,,,mr tikay.,.,i am working on it all now i had to rush earlier no excuses.,.,.,but im on it now.,.,.,

Out of interest, what did the person who wanted this ask for?

(http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/uploads/2/0/0/2/2002459/263252.jpg?167659)

It just seems designed to give you that 'fell asleep beside some railings' suntan effect.

obv gonna whack some coconut matting on the roof at some point

Hi Sofa,

Good effort - whole thing looks nice and has potential. As for the name I think it's good, a little cheesy but the Greeks out there LOVE cheesy so if it works its good right? Def get someone to lay it out a little better and sort the grammar etc.

Also, why do you do this.....,,,,,,,....,,,,,..,,,,...,,.,....in your posts? always wondered

I'd have a section of some examples of your work with associated prices.

Title it "Previous projects and fitted cost"

Picture + price tells the whole story. I guess you could just add prices to the more pictures section.

Not enough web sites give price example and that's the main thing people are bothered about.

Scrap the picture with the 2 blokes in the more pictures section. You can't see it very well and it looks like a couple of random lads who've just been playing football. Nobody wants to buy that.

After a comma there should be a space and then start a new word.



FEEL FREE TO POST AWAY,WE HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE  should be

Feel free to post away, we have nothing to hide.

Also:  WE MANUFACTURED AND FITTED, THIS SUN-DECK AND PERGOLA FOR €1,950 AFTER THE CUSTOMER WAS QUOTED NEARLY €6,000,SIZE WAS 4M X 3M,WE HOPE THIS GIVES YOU SOME IDEA OF OUR PRICES.

might read better as follows;

Our customer was quoted 1,950 by a competitor but we manufactured and fitted this sun deck and pergola using the same specifications and materials (4MX3M) for just 1,950 (can't find euro sign sorry).

You dont want any spelling mistakes on your website either..  srry tikay, had to quote it

Space out the phone number a bit, Tel: 990 775 67 reads a bit better imo, easier to take note of.
Get some proper quotes from customers on there rather than redirecting people to search forums
Get rid of the bad quality images, there's some real crap quality ones on there and I wouldn't start it with a massive ad, it's a showcase of your work section

Looks good though for a first attempt, like the colours you've chosen, very pleasing on the eye

you knw what thanka a lot guys.,.,im doing it all now be a few hours i think but whe its done.,.,.,i will let all knwo.,.,
great idea about jobs and prices i thought of that..,wd.,.,all athers i am thinking as i write.,.,.,thnx to yalll wd..,.,

Oops!

Just testing, to see if anyone noticed.......

I've just seen the partly modified, lower-case, grown-up writing section James - that's MUCH better. It still needs tidying up grammatically - when you have finished, cut & paste it onto here, & someone will tidy it up for you.

But, as Andrew says, this HAS to go!

have i missed something are you staying out there now?

lol no mate building it up tosell it lol.,.,.,.,

as to web thing i am doing it as we speak anything i fook up on please let me know coz im thick..,.,

He's Welsh.

A few years ago, he had to go on another Website covertly - there was a bit of grimming going off -  so he used a new moniker, & got stuck into the grimmers. The trouble was, it was all/////,,,,,....\\\\\\\ sorta thing.

Anyway, the grimmers recognized him - obviously! & outed him.

So he wrote to me demanding to know who had told the grimmers it was him.

It sorta went "tONy, ...//////how dID those b88stARds\\\,,,,, know it was me, I'm well pi33ed off?"

Just wait until you see his home-drawn pictures......

We had a hippograffe one night I think. And he undressed Chili, too. He did, I tell you.

Those were the days :D

if im not too  pi5 later i might draw yall a
fencodekaperolagoff.,.,.,its all made of wood.,.,.,.,

awwwww hey ho worse things happen m8 but yr still there in may right??

am over for a week staying at http://www.tripadvisor.com/Hotel_Review-g667803-d292112-Reviews-Vrissiana_Beach_Hotel-Protaras.html (http://www.tripadvisor.com/Hotel_Review-g667803-d292112-Reviews-Vrissiana_Beach_Hotel-Protaras.html) anywhere near you? ill have a look to see if they need any fencing for ya...

the virisianna what a schite hole lololo.,.,.,naa its very nice looks like a ship from outside..,.,are you bringing the kids?
if so i will get my mates boat and take yall for a spin..,.,.,what a boat.,.,.,.,£80k speadboat it's the bol0x..,,,you have to ring me when your here 00357 99077567
if you dont ring,,,you must go to konnos bay.,.,best beach on the isand.,.,20 min from protaras.,....

how about now????

http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/

Nah m8 no kids just me and the mrs,but would deffo be up for a trip on the boat though might even throw you in and make you swim back lol,

does it have a tow rope for sking?

apparently missus says hotel not suited for kids woooohooooo ,.,.,.,.

btw i think it the best website i have ever visited  ;)

for fencing

skis, ropes, donut.,.,it goes 65-70 mph......or can meet you at konnos bay for a go on the fastest jet bike on the island75mph,,,,,..,,. my mate mike rents out all the watersport gear ,,, www.mikeswatersports.com  i think thats is at konnos bay.,.,.,he wont let anyone go on his personal jet ski.,.,only me coz i tought him ho to levitate.,,..,.,
fukin gutted im comming back.,.,.life is great here.,,.,i might murder my wife.,.,.,seriously there are a lot of kids at virissiana.,.,..,kids clubs and all that.,.,.,they got great views from there.,.,.we get pi55ed  there sometimes.,.,.

if im not working i will 100% take you on the boat.,.,if not i will take you on the pi55.,.,.,.,lol..,.,should be ok.,.,how long you here for?

deffo an insta snap call then, piss up or whatever will be good

only there for a week unless i can get some mug nice person to look after kids for longer

but noooooooooooo on the kids and kids club no no no,.,.,.

13th - 20th of may is intended dates...

dont go paying a fortune i can get you a 1/2 million pound detached villa off a mate for 500 gbp for a week,3 bed 3 bath ,,pool,,very quiet area,,,
mind you the hotels are screaming out for customers at the moment euro is chit.,..,dont go paying more than 100gbp  a night.,.,
fligt around 220 euros return each might be even cheaper,,,mind you if you can get all inclusive as it is quite expensive here.,.,

£680 pp all inclusive ftw

already shelled out

is that with flights and transfers?

if it is thats for nothing.,..,.,i could drink £680 worth of vodka in a week.,.,.,,

MUCH better.

But you need to insert a space between paragraphs, otherwise it's too "heavy" & cluttered to read - as I've done below. I've also cleaned up a few typos. I'm not sure about the spelling of "meter" - it's metre in the UK, but it may be "meter" over there. (A "meter" is, for example, a gas meter).

We at Fabfencing promise to give you the best value for money island-wide, building up a clientele all over Cyprus.

Whether it be supplying and fitting a new gate, or building a fence of more than 3km  around one of the islands best known water parks, we have the ecxpertise.

We aim to give satisfaction to every customer, giving them what they want, when they want it, at a fair price.

Some customers ask why are we lot cheaper and better quality than other fencing companies? Our answer is simple......we are realistic!

We can offer reduced rates to customers, knowing that when we price a job we know we are going to do it. We try our very best to explain to customers that timber here in Cyprus is a bit more expensive than the U.K, but please don't think that our labour charges are more than the U.K, they are not.

I personally get annoyed when going to draw up a quote at a customers house, knowing that they have already been quoted a ridiculous price by another company. I see this everyday, people being quoted for 50m of fencing @ €80-€90 per meter, thats nearly €4,500 for fencing it's not fair, our fencing starts at €40 per meter and very rarely goes above €50 per meter.

We hide nothing from our customers, a full breakdown of costs can be provided to every customer. What I personally promise is that whatever you have built by Fabfencing, it's built to last with a full 10 year written guarantee. You only have to see what just a few of our customers say about us, then we will let you be the judge.

We would also like to let you all kow that although we are based in Kapparis on the East coast, we work all over the island, from Ayia Napa to Paphos, Nicosia, Larnaca, leaving a trail of very happy & pleased customers.

Please take the time to look around my site at some pictures, to give you some indication of our quality and pricing, thanks for looking,

Regards, James.

thanks to all.,.,especially.,.,tony and dingdell,.,i have copied and paste a few things of what you said.,.,.,.,/./.,.,

i hope you all dont think im thick with my spelling.,.,i am trying to learn to type quick.,.,and somtimes i miss letters out..,.,.,lol..,.,.,,.,

thnq thnq thnq.,.,.,i have taken on board what you have ALL said and have listened and tried to make changes,.,.i have tons of pics.,.,i need to shrink and fook about with.,..,.but i thank you all again for making it look better.,.,.,cheers blondesssssssss

I think thats much better - much more approachable. If I were to tweek it the things I would change are make the writing slightly bigger - it's a little small for easy reading and don't do it in italics. Italics are mainly for emphasising/highlighting a few words but it's more difficult to read in whole paragraphs.

But brilliant!

I feel a blonde bash coming on.......

all changed now to what you said.,.,.,.,.,i rekon i could start building websites for cash.,.,.,.what yall think.,.,.,.,ok forget it then.,.,.,.,thnx all.,.,any more ideas are more than welcome.,.,.,

if you are needing proper hosting and a proper website URL, email addresses etc then drop me a line.

much cheapness... :)

You over there too???

call me stupid but whats all this for???
people know my email address for last few years.,.,

Right opinion only...

opening picture doesn't appeal to me hurts the eyes with the stripey lines and the main white background could do with changing,

Nope but I have been known to travel miles for the opening of an envelope. I think we should turn your holiday into an international blonde bash. Drink the island dry and leave the locals reeling having fleeced them with our poker skillz.

ok cool I'm in and james(I Have my own website) any others????

some real good tournaments up north around then.,.,,  merit hotel and casino kyrenia...,.,cheap to stay there,.,.big brag here i stay for free.,.,but do my boll0x on the wheel..,.,lol
im saving up for the $1,000,000 guarnteed i think its the 28th may 09 .,.,.,.$3k buy in.,..,.,.,it's like vegas style up there.,.,very profesional.,..,

Just had anothrer butchers, & it's much improved now - well done.

One more thing - though this is purely persoinal opinion, not "correctness"  - the whole page is a little "flat" - due to the pure white background. A little dash of colour would lift it a treat.

9/10.

i thought the same tbh.,.,but not sure how to put some stuff in the background.,.,got to go out now to price up a few jobs,.,.,will try later.,.,thanks again for input...,.,

if anyone is bored and fancys having a look how i can colour it up a bit.,.im sure i could ship them some beers.,.,.here or in the u.k,,...
it realy needs coour to lift it even some peoples web sites like links to some of the developers i do work for???any ideas how to .,.,thnx guys.,.,.,

this is a good website for info.,.,..,

  http://www.britishfencing.com/  (http://www.britishfencing.com/)

and this 1 looks good   http://www.jacksons-fencing.co.uk/   (http://www.jacksons-fencing.co.uk/)

i like the auto changing pictures in this 1,.,.  http://www.apfencing.co.uk/  (http://www.apfencing.co.uk/)

There are still numerous commas where there should be new sentences.

The personal stuff ('me and my mates' and 'I personally get angry', etc.) looks unprofessional to me.

I think the basics are there, but it needs a lot of tweaking to look like a smooth, professional company operating island-wide rather than a one man band run on a shoestring.  Perception is everything and first impressions matter!  As Groucho said, 'Integrity is the thing.  Fake that, and you've got it made.'

If you do nothing else, remove the surplus 'c' in 'ecxpertise' right at the start.  Being a world-class pedant, I would go elsewhere after reading two sentences if I saw that.

I can't comment on the visual/graphics side of things - I'm useless at that (and erecting fencing).

I agree with this 100%.

"Me and my wife went to visit........blah blah blah........"

"Me and the boys ended up staying............blah blah blah.....after speaking to someone in a bar.........blah blah blah"

Anbody who doesn't know you doesn't care. They just want to buy a fence.

Hope this doesn't sound harsh. Just being honest mate.  :)up

Looking much better now though.

Well we are getting really heavy now, but yes, that's also true.

"I, personally" is bad. "Personally" is just fine.

"Me and my mates", or "me & my wife" is horrendous, & one of the most common mistakes ever. It's "my mates & I", (though "mates" is awful in this context) or "my wife & I". NEVER "my mates and ME", or "my wife and ME".

Good to see you 12bar - we don't see/hear enough of you these days. You ok?

Whether it be supplying and fitting a new gate, or building a fence of more than 3km  around one of the islands best known water parks, we have the ecxpertise

more pics more interaction

you need some fake ppl recommending you. eg "fabfencing is awesome very good value for money" gustav from skegness

a better pic would be nice it seems abit pixely

a catch phrase would be good so that ppl who see the site will remember it.

your heading is pants u need to it to stand out

just been messing about with it again what ya think.,.,nearly there??

I am certainly no expert, but I like the look of the site. Nice

Much improved still a little way to go though but am liking the changes especially that photo,.,.,.,.

just a little grammar change needed in this line.
our customer was quoted €75 euros per metre for this job.We done it for €45 per metre,

I must admit i like your honesty on the page it certainly comes through, it would be nice to be able to click on the pics for an enlarged view too.

"Our client received a quotation from a competitor of 75 euros per metre for this particular project. We were able to supply and install to the same standard for 45 euros per metre".

For example.

Better & better.

I'm glad to see the spelling of "metre" has changed.

And why not use the € sign instead of saying "45 euros"? (Before sofa asks, it's AltGr + 4).

Now, get your fat arse home. That's James fat arse, not Matt's.

getting there.

look at ur competition and their websites and see what they have to offer.

if you are based in greece/cyprus isnt it better to do it greek or cypriot?

u also need to focus on ur market. who do u expect to buy ur product and adapt to their needs. make them feel like they need your product in their lives.

but not b4 May  ;)

When James gets home, I'm gonna challenge him to a Heads-Up Levitation Match.

I actually taught him how to levitate - it was at Cardiff, if I recall correctly.

And I may have been the first person to levitate on a Live TV show. 

seriously guys thanks a lot,,you have all really helped out in your own ways,.,.,.,im not sure whether i should come to a blonde bash.,.,it's gonna cost me a fortune.,.,.,thnx all
any more ideas welcome i am changing things everyday.,.,.,.just fooking sick im comming home.,.,.,web site went up only a few days ago ,.,and have had quite a few enquirys.,.,

big question here.,.,any ideas how to put a counter on the site to see how many people visit it???
the more i think i should ave had this done by a pro now.,.,i wish i would ave.,.,.,but i wanted to have a go at doing it myself.,.,not to save ex's .,.,i just want to put on there whats in my mind.,.,sort to speak.,.,.,thanks again..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,james.,.,.,

pmsl.,.,.,lololololololololololol.,.,,olollolol

i was doing it lastnight in a bar to a load of cypriots.,.,.they were head fooked.,.,.,.,.,lolololollololol,.,.,.,.
if.,.,if and when i am home and coe to one of your beating up the blonde lady dooooos.,.,.,i will do a proffesional showing of it.,.,.,.,tony wait till you see it.,.,.,it confuses me evennn.,.,.,.,.,.,BTW.,.,I TAUGHT YOU.,.,.,.,

LOL at the cut and paste Sofa.

You've left the quotes in you tool!!

LOL YOU JUST HAD ME GO BACK ON THERE I THOUGHT.,.,ID LEFT THE                        for  exampe                     in.,.,.lol

I like the imperfect grammar, polish it too much and you eradicate all traces of your personality which would be a shame.

I also like the way you get into talking about the numbers straight away. Combined with the imperfect prose, this conveys to me a certain openness and honesty about the buisness that a chiselled professionally produced site might lack.

I'd totally keep the "we done it for $45 per metre"

Does anyone else not think that there's something a bit shifty about a builder who reels off perfectly manicured sentences.

I want to hire someone who knows about fences, not tenses.

as i say i dont build fences/pergolas with a pen.,.,.,lol.,.,.,you hit the nail on the head.,.,i dont want to got to far from,.,.,what im trying to say.,.,in my words/./.

just say jesus fooked about with wood and so do i,

 so whats good for the masses will be good for you ,.,.,.

good news lastnight.,., i forgot i bought www.fabfencing.com   last year.,..,one of the guys who owns one of the sites.,.,rang me and said hey nice web site but the name looks pants.,,.,.,.,.so today/tommorow,,,,he will sort it all out so that it's the above....it wil look much better i think..,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,