rate my new website..,.,,.

[sofa----king]

how about now?

http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/

[cia260895]

Nah m8 no kids just me and the mrs,but would deffo be up for a trip on the boat though might even throw you in and make you swim back lol,

does it have a tow rope for sking?

apparently missus says hotel not suited for kids woooohooooo ,.,.,.,.

[cia260895]

btw i think it the best website i have ever visited 

for fencing

[sofa----king]

Nah m8 no kids just me and the mrs,but would deffo be up for a trip on the boat though might even throw you in and make you swim back lol,

does it have a tow rope for sking?

apparently missus says hotel not suited for kids woooohooooo ,.,.,.,.

skis, ropes, donut.,.,it goes 65-70 mph......or can meet you at konnos bay for a go on the fastest jet bike on the island75mph,,,,,..,,. my mate mike rents out all the watersport gear ,,, www.mikeswatersports.com  i think thats is at konnos bay.,.,.,he wont let anyone go on his personal jet ski.,.,only me coz i tought him ho to levitate.,,..,.,
fukin gutted im comming back.,.,.life is great here.,,.,i might murder my wife.,.,.,seriously there are a lot of kids at virissiana.,.,..,kids clubs and all that.,.,.,they got great views from there.,.,.we get pi55ed  there sometimes.,.,.

[sofa----king]

btw i think it the best website i have ever visited 

for fencing

if im not working i will 100% take you on the boat.,.,if not i will take you on the pi55.,.,.,.,lol..,.,should be ok.,.,how long you here for?

[cia260895]

deffo an insta snap call then, piss up or whatever will be good

only there for a week unless i can get some mug nice person to look after kids for longer

but noooooooooooo on the kids and kids club no no no,.,.,.

[cia260895]

13th - 20th of may is intended dates...

[sofa----king]

13th - 20th of may is intended dates...

dont go paying a fortune i can get you a 1/2 million pound detached villa off a mate for 500 gbp for a week,3 bed 3 bath ,,pool,,very quiet area,,,
mind you the hotels are screaming out for customers at the moment euro is chit.,..,dont go paying more than 100gbp  a night.,.,
fligt around 220 euros return each might be even cheaper,,,mind you if you can get all inclusive as it is quite expensive here.,.,

[cia260895]

£680 pp all inclusive ftw

already shelled out

[sofa----king]

£680 pp all inclusive ftw

already shelled out

is that with flights and transfers?

if it is thats for nothing.,..,.,i could drink £680 worth of vodka in a week.,.,.,,

[cia260895]

£680 pp all inclusive ftw

already shelled out

is that with flights and transfers?        sure is

if it is thats for nothing.,..,.,i could drink £680 worth of vodka in a week.,.,.,, Ill try me best

[tikay]

how about now?

http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/

MUCH better.

But you need to insert a space between paragraphs, otherwise it's too "heavy" & cluttered to read - as I've done below. I've also cleaned up a few typos. I'm not sure about the spelling of "meter" - it's metre in the UK, but it may be "meter" over there. (A "meter" is, for example, a gas meter).

We at Fabfencing promise to give you the best value for money island-wide, building up a clientele all over Cyprus.

Whether it be supplying and fitting a new gate, or building a fence of more than 3km  around one of the islands best known water parks, we have the ecxpertise.

We aim to give satisfaction to every customer, giving them what they want, when they want it, at a fair price.

Some customers ask why are we lot cheaper and better quality than other fencing companies? Our answer is simple......we are realistic!

We can offer reduced rates to customers, knowing that when we price a job we know we are going to do it. We try our very best to explain to customers that timber here in Cyprus is a bit more expensive than the U.K, but please don't think that our labour charges are more than the U.K, they are not.

I personally get annoyed when going to draw up a quote at a customers house, knowing that they have already been quoted a ridiculous price by another company. I see this everyday, people being quoted for 50m of fencing @ €80-€90 per meter, thats nearly €4,500 for fencing it's not fair, our fencing starts at €40 per meter and very rarely goes above €50 per meter.

We hide nothing from our customers, a full breakdown of costs can be provided to every customer. What I personally promise is that whatever you have built by Fabfencing, it's built to last with a full 10 year written guarantee. You only have to see what just a few of our customers say about us, then we will let you be the judge.

We would also like to let you all kow that although we are based in Kapparis on the East coast, we work all over the island, from Ayia Napa to Paphos, Nicosia, Larnaca, leaving a trail of very happy & pleased customers.

Please take the time to look around my site at some pictures, to give you some indication of our quality and pricing, thanks for looking,

Regards, James.

[sofa----king]

thanks to all.,.,especially.,.,tony and dingdell,.,i have copied and paste a few things of what you said.,.,.,.,/./.,.,

i hope you all dont think im thick with my spelling.,.,i am trying to learn to type quick.,.,and somtimes i miss letters out..,.,.,lol..,.,.,,.,

thnq thnq thnq.,.,.,i have taken on board what you have ALL said and have listened and tried to make changes,.,.i have tons of pics.,.,i need to shrink and fook about with.,..,.but i thank you all again for making it look better.,.,.,cheers blondesssssssss

[Dingdell]

I think thats much better - much more approachable. If I were to tweek it the things I would change are make the writing slightly bigger - it's a little small for easy reading and don't do it in italics. Italics are mainly for emphasising/highlighting a few words but it's more difficult to read in whole paragraphs.

But brilliant!

[Dingdell]

13th - 20th of may is intended dates...

I feel a blonde bash coming on.......