need some blonde good vibes please.,.,.,

[pleno1]

seems pricey

[sofa----king]

seems pricey

lol it would be for you..,.,
i have written quotations from 3 diff firms how they should be priced and they were more expensive than these...

[StuartHopkin]

Different headline at the top
Change 2nd headline to 'The most sort after 60 number plates'
Have all the photos in the same order, probs photo at the top, then the plate, then the price at the bottom.
Add your surname next to your mobile number.
Remove the hyphon next to email, replace with a colon and a space.
Capital O for offers.

Imo of course!

[lazaroonie]

Different headline at the top
Change 2nd headline to 'The most sort after 60 number plates'
Have all the photos in the same order, probs photo at the top, then the plate, then the price at the bottom.
Add your surname next to your mobile number.
Remove the hyphon next to email, replace with a colon and a space.
Capital O for offers.

Imo of course!

i agree. having an advert with price tags like these and then a single name and a mobile number sounds well dodgy...

[kinboshi]

Also, would use a different domain for emails.  @yahoo.com sounds even dodgier than just having a mobile number...

[sofa----king]

Ok guys thanks for advice I will have a swap around later
cheers all good comments I agree about email ect

[byronkincaid]

Different headline at the top
Change 2nd headline to 'The most sort after 60 number plates'
Have all the photos in the same order, probs photo at the top, then the plate, then the price at the bottom.
Add your surname next to your mobile number.
Remove the hyphon next to email, replace with a colon and a space.
Capital O for offers.

Imo of course!

sought imo of course

[StuartHopkin]

Different headline at the top
Change 2nd headline to 'The most sort after 60 number plates'
Have all the photos in the same order, probs photo at the top, then the plate, then the price at the bottom.
Add your surname next to your mobile number.
Remove the hyphon next to email, replace with a colon and a space.
Capital O for offers.

Imo of course!

sought imo of course

I actually wrote sought, then didnt think it looked right so but sort, then saught then very quickly looked on the internet and thought it was sort.

Im sorry

[EvilPie]

Different headline at the top
Change 2nd headline to 'The most sort after 60 number plates'
Have all the photos in the same order, probs photo at the top, then the plate, then the price at the bottom.
Add your surname next to your mobile number.
Remove the hyphon next to email, replace with a colon and a space.
Capital O for offers.

Imo of course!

sought imo of course

I actually wrote sought, then didnt think it looked right so but sort, then saught then very quickly looked on the internet and thought it was sort.

Im sorry

put imo of course

[EvilPie]

I see what you mean about the numbers not looking great. They are definitely too small.

How's about splitting the ad in to 4 sections?

You could then just have 3 bigger pictures showing the best 3 plates, MC60WAN, MR60ALS and GO60BAR

Then in the other section have your contact details, a bit of spiel and and "Also available, PA60DAS.... etc. etc."

[EvilPie]

Also, would use a different domain for emails.  @yahoo.com sounds even dodgier than just having a mobile number...

Agree with this.

For what it would cost to set up a different email address I'd definitely look in to something different.

Just had a quick look and "prestige60plates" .com or .co.uk are both available.

Either would look far more professional to people potentially spending £20k+ on a plate.

[sofa----king]

well thanks for your ideas little did i know i got an email late today saying if i change anything now.,.,aftrer that i sent it to top marques i will have to wait another 3 weeks before it get in so.,.,boll0x i said put it in.,its done know.,.,deadline was today i thought it was friday.,.,never mind just have to wait n see.,.,must say some of you were right about email add etc.,.,
as to the pics its on a much bigger better scale you cCAN def see the plates on the cars i will try to put a pic of actual add size each car will loook.,.,thats try mind.,.,.

[EvilPie]

Will be having a look in Top Marques on the 3rd.

I won't buy it because I'm saving up for a year to buy MR61MPS and make a killing out of selling it to Hopkin.

[sofa----king]

and to be honest sometimes its good for something to go wrong in the advert i cn have a scream then and maybe get a few adds in future editions for free,,,some firms do this for real...i remember having an add done for the radio a few years ago and i knew they put the wrong address down (number of the road got £1,500 worth of free adds...)but everyone knew where my sofa warehouse was you couldnt miss it it said everything in this ware house is STOLEN in big read writting..also on the delivery vans...STOLEN SOFAS made heads turn....i will have a look for the radio add i had it on disc somewhere...was real funny...it went something like....NEWS FLASH NEWS FLASH......REPORTS ARE COMMING IN ...
THERES A GUY DOWN WENTLOOGE RD SELLING STOLEN SOFAS ALL UNDER HALF
 PRICE....PEOPLE ARE DRIVING OFF WITH THEM STICKING OUT OF THE BACK OF THEY CARS....ON ROOF RACKS....SOMEONE HAS BEEN REPORTED AS TO BE STUCK UNDER NEWPORT ROADS WALKWAY BRIDGE..WITH 3 SOFAS ON TOP OF THEIR CAR ....ETCETCETC....

AND IN THE BACK GROUND THE NOISE WAS LIKE PEOPLE TYPING AND THE NEWS AT 10 TYPE OF MUSIC....LOL

[StuartHopkin]

Will be having a look in Top Marques on the 3rd.

I won't buy it because I'm saving up for a year to buy MR61MPS and make a killing out of selling it to Hopkin.

Mate I actually would buy that and drive around in a head to toe leather gimp suit.