Write more tales Ralph, you have a gift for story-telling, & write so beautifully.
To be fair, any written piece "reads" 100% better if it's properly presented, with paras, punctuation, & them oldey-fashioned things like full stops & commas. The internet & text messaging is destroying - has destroyed - written Engllish in so short a time - less than 20 years?
So true.
Owned. By a Fenlander.

Lol.
He PM'd me huffily to point out that Fenlanders & Norfolk-ers are not quite the same thing, sent me links to Wiki Pages & all sorts.
Sensitive subject, apparently, & his 127 cousins all agreed.