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« Reply #15 on: March 18, 2009, 05:28:36 PM »

Hi Sofa,

Good effort - whole thing looks nice and has potential. As for the name I think it's good, a little cheesy but the Greeks out there LOVE cheesy so if it works its good right? Def get someone to lay it out a little better and sort the grammar etc.

Also, why do you do this.....,,,,,,,....,,,,,..,,,,...,,.,....in your posts? always wondered
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« Reply #16 on: March 18, 2009, 05:32:22 PM »

I'd have a section of some examples of your work with associated prices.

Title it "Previous projects and fitted cost"

Picture + price tells the whole story. I guess you could just add prices to the more pictures section.

Not enough web sites give price example and that's the main thing people are bothered about.

Scrap the picture with the 2 blokes in the more pictures section. You can't see it very well and it looks like a couple of random lads who've just been playing football. Nobody wants to buy that.
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« Reply #17 on: March 18, 2009, 05:48:32 PM »

After a comma there should be a space and then start a new word.



FEEL FREE TO POST AWAY,WE HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE  should be

Feel free to post away, we have nothing to hide.

Also:  WE MANUFACTURED AND FITTED, THIS SUN-DECK AND PERGOLA FOR €1,950 AFTER THE CUSTOMER WAS QUOTED NEARLY €6,000,SIZE WAS 4M X 3M,WE HOPE THIS GIVES YOU SOME IDEA OF OUR PRICES.

might read better as follows;

Our customer was quoted 1,950 by a competitor but we manufactured and fitted this sun deck and pergola using the same specifications and materials (4MX3M) for just 1,950 (can't find euro sign sorry).



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« Reply #18 on: March 18, 2009, 05:49:26 PM »




"WE AT FABFENCING PROMISE TO BEAT ANY QUOTE" LIKE FOR LIKE,

Should be....

We at FabFencing promise to beat any quite, like for like.



You dont want any spelling mistakes on your website either..  srry tikay, had to quote it
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« Reply #19 on: March 18, 2009, 05:52:05 PM »

Space out the phone number a bit, Tel: 990 775 67 reads a bit better imo, easier to take note of.
Get some proper quotes from customers on there rather than redirecting people to search forums
Get rid of the bad quality images, there's some real crap quality ones on there and I wouldn't start it with a massive ad, it's a showcase of your work section

Looks good though for a first attempt, like the colours you've chosen, very pleasing on the eye
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« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2009, 05:56:49 PM »

you knw what thanka a lot guys.,.,im doing it all now be a few hours i think but whe its done.,.,.,i will let all knwo.,.,
great idea about jobs and prices i thought of that..,wd.,.,all athers i am thinking as i write.,.,.,thnx to yalll wd..,.,
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« Reply #21 on: March 18, 2009, 06:21:32 PM »




"WE AT FABFENCING PROMISE TO BEAT ANY QUOTE" LIKE FOR LIKE,

Should be....

We at FabFencing promise to beat any quite, like for like.



You dont want any spelling mistakes on your website either..  srry tikay, had to quote it

Oops!

Just testing, to see if anyone noticed.......
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« Reply #22 on: March 18, 2009, 06:27:39 PM »


I've just seen the partly modified, lower-case, grown-up writing section James - that's MUCH better. It still needs tidying up grammatically - when you have finished, cut & paste it onto here, & someone will tidy it up for you.

But, as Andrew says, this HAS to go!
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« Reply #23 on: March 18, 2009, 06:43:11 PM »

have i missed something are you staying out there now?
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« Reply #24 on: March 18, 2009, 06:56:18 PM »

have i missed something are you staying out there now?
lol no mate building it up tosell it lol.,.,.,.,

as to web thing i am doing it as we speak anything i fook up on please let me know coz im thick..,.,
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« Reply #25 on: March 18, 2009, 06:57:10 PM »

Hi Sofa,

Good effort - whole thing looks nice and has potential. As for the name I think it's good, a little cheesy but the Greeks out there LOVE cheesy so if it works its good right? Def get someone to lay it out a little better and sort the grammar etc.

Also, why do you do this.....,,,,,,,....,,,,,..,,,,...,,.,....in your posts? always wondered

He's Welsh.

A few years ago, he had to go on another Website covertly - there was a bit of grimming going off -  so he used a new moniker, & got stuck into the grimmers. The trouble was, it was all/////,,,,,....\\\\\\\ sorta thing.

Anyway, the grimmers recognized him - obviously! & outed him.

So he wrote to me demanding to know who had told the grimmers it was him.

It sorta went "tONy, ...//////how dID those b88stARds\\\,,,,, know it was me, I'm well pi33ed off?"

Just wait until you see his home-drawn pictures......

We had a hippograffe one night I think. And he undressed Chili, too. He did, I tell you.
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« Reply #26 on: March 18, 2009, 07:00:42 PM »

We had a hippograffe one night I think. And he undressed Chili, too. He did, I tell you.

Those were the days Cheesy
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« Reply #27 on: March 18, 2009, 07:12:13 PM »

We had a hippograffe one night I think. And he undressed Chili, too. He did, I tell you.

Those were the days Cheesy
if im not too  pi5 later i might draw yall a
fencodekaperolagoff.,.,.,its all made of wood.,.,.,.,
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« Reply #28 on: March 18, 2009, 09:03:15 PM »

have i missed something are you staying out there now?
lol no mate building it up tosell it lol.,.,.,.,

as to web thing i am doing it as we speak anything i fook up on please let me know coz im thick..,.,

awwwww hey ho worse things happen m8 but yr still there in may right??

am over for a week staying at http://www.tripadvisor.com/Hotel_Review-g667803-d292112-Reviews-Vrissiana_Beach_Hotel-Protaras.html anywhere near you? ill have a look to see if they need any fencing for ya...
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« Reply #29 on: March 18, 2009, 10:50:57 PM »

have i missed something are you staying out there now?
lol no mate building it up tosell it lol.,.,.,.,

as to web thing i am doing it as we speak anything i fook up on please let me know coz im thick..,.,

awwwww hey ho worse things happen m8 but yr still there in may right??

am over for a week staying at http://www.tripadvisor.com/Hotel_Review-g667803-d292112-Reviews-Vrissiana_Beach_Hotel-Protaras.html anywhere near you? ill have a look to see if they need any fencing for ya...

the virisianna what a schite hole lololo.,.,.,naa its very nice looks like a ship from outside..,.,are you bringing the kids?
if so i will get my mates boat and take yall for a spin..,.,.,what a boat.,.,.,.,£80k speadboat it's the bol0x..,,,you have to ring me when your here 00357 99077567
if you dont ring,,,you must go to konnos bay.,.,best beach on the isand.,.,20 min from protaras.,....


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