rate my new website..,.,,.

[sofa----king]

was gonna pay €500 for this today.,.,i though fookem i will try myself for free.,.,.,.,
need my old blonde mateys to rate it out of 10???.,.,no fooking round guys.,.,.,lol.,.,.,
i feel pleased with my self this week with new lappie.,.,and my new web site.,.,what yall think..,.,.,.,

http://fabfencingcy.weebly.com/

[Bongo]

Ditch the all caps and use proper case, it will be far easier to read.

[sofa----king]

Ditch the all caps and use proper case, it will be far easier to read.

fair point thnq. i will look at this.,,..,,.,.,.,it was hard enough not doing these.,..,.,,..,..,.,.,.,.,things.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,

[Woodsey]

7/10 for visuality, not bad looking few more pics and you would be sorted. edit- a couple more pics on the front page maybe?
0/10 for name of company and text. Sorry it just sound like a total cowboy outfit and Fabfencing name doesn't help you either. Get some professional language on there and change the name of the company and it could look good. I would not buy from you based on this.

Sorry just being honest, hope that helps.

[sofa----king]

7/10 for visuality, not bad looking few more pics and you would be sorted.
0/10 for name of company and text. Sorry it just sound like a total cowboy outfit and Fabfencing name doesn't help you either. Get some professional language on there and change the name of the company and it could look good. I would not buy from you based on this.

Sorry just being honest, hope that helps.

i have been fabfencing out here for nearly 2 years.,.,.,and it has worked ok upto now..,.,i got lots more pics to add but was getting fed up.,.,lol
all the work in the pics have been done by me.,.,or one of my guys.,.,.,

i think your right about the wording.,.,.,but i cut to the bone and tell them how it is.,.,i dont buid pergolas with a pen.,.,.,if you knw what i mean but thanks for pointing a few things .,,.,out.,.,cheers.,.,.,


starting to wish id never asked.,.,.,lmao.,.,i was so chuffed with my web stie.,.,.,now it's.,.,.,schite.,.,.,lollololol.,.,.,thnx guys i would rather the truth seriously..,.,

[TheChipPrince]

Being honest, I would get it done professionally.  A good website can vitually sell the product, you'd only need one extra sale all year to pay for what getting the website done will cost.

I'd also use a Cyprus email address, having a UK one can look a little dubious...

[Tractor]

Get fabfencing.eu or .net and redirect it.
For a first attempt, not bad. 5/10

[Woodsey]

7/10 for visuality, not bad looking few more pics and you would be sorted.
0/10 for name of company and text. Sorry it just sound like a total cowboy outfit and Fabfencing name doesn't help you either. Get some professional language on there and change the name of the company and it could look good. I would not buy from you based on this.

Sorry just being honest, hope that helps.

i have been fabfencing out here for nearly 2 years.,.,.,and it has worked ok upto now..,.,i got lots more pics to add but was getting fed up.,.,lol
all the work in the pics have been done by me.,.,or one of my guys.,.,.,

i think your right about the wording.,.,.,but i cut to the bone and tell them how it is.,.,i dont buid pergolas with a pen.,.,.,if you knw what i mean but thanks for pointing a few things .,,.,out.,.,cheers.,.,.,


starting to wish id never asked.,.,.,lmao.,.,i was so chuffed with my web stie.,.,.,now it's.,.,.,schite.,.,.,lollololol.,.,.,thnx guys i would rather the truth seriously..,.,

OK I can live with the name. Find a friend though who has good written skills though and it should make a difference, get rid of the cheesy smash it out the the park stuff though and make sure the language is professional. Other than that it does look ok though.

[sofa----king]

thnx it do look a bit cheesy now.,.,.,smash/park etc.,.,.,
im gonna be up all night now to re-impress yall later.,.,.,thnx

[EvilPie]

 

[tikay]

Tidy it up grammatically James.

Always a space after a comma or full-stop, as here......(& throughout).

PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE

Should be......

Please, please, please

Remove the inverted commas, & use a full stop at the end of the sentence, as here.......(& several other sentences ditto)

"WE AT FABFENCING PROMISE TO BEAT ANY QUOTE" LIKE FOR LIKE,

Should be....

We at FabFencing promise to beat any quite, like for like.

Abandon the shouty all upper-case stuff, write like a normal person. Capitals at the start of a sentence, or for proper nouns.

The word "rot" needs changing. It just looks wrong, as here. And a full-stop at the end of the sentence.

WE ALSO OFFER A FULL 10 YEAR GUARANTEE AGAINST WIND AND ROT

We also offer a full 10 year guarantee against the material, & weather damage.

It's good. Go get 'em Fisher!

[tikay]

Oh yeah, remove all that "smash out of the park" nonsense.

[sofa----king]

thankyou sir,,,mr tikay.,.,i am working on it all now i had to rush earlier no excuses.,.,.,but im on it now.,.,.,

[AndrewT]

Out of interest, what did the person who wanted this ask for?

Click to see full-size image.

It just seems designed to give you that 'fell asleep beside some railings' suntan effect.

[Colchester Kev]

Out of interest, what did the person who wanted this ask for?

Click to see full-size image.

It just seems designed to give you that 'fell asleep beside some railings' suntan effect.

obv gonna whack some coconut matting on the roof at some point